We showed the first draft of the video to the rest of our class to get feedback about what could be improved. These were the criticisms:
- The ipod at the beginning; the seconds is 14 seconds into the song and the '_01_' is distracting.
- The last verse with the '10p machine' is too calm compared to the fast pace of music; either replace or get rid of.
- There's a verse where she is in pink and the lip-synching is slightly off, also this shot is too long as the viewer would get board or distracted quite easily.
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